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One Last Time by ConcreteGirl24, literature

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One Last Time

Thoughts running through my head, I wonder what went so awry. Was it something I did or something I never said? Like lightening through the midnight sky, My heart is torn in two, Between the hurt that can't be healed, And the love I felt for you, The love that can't be concealed. I've held my breath for far too long, Sinking beneath the weight, Of all the things done wrong, And all the harbored hate. Regretting the ardor, I am sorry that I ever loved you so, Now it only makes it harder, For me to let you go. Please tell me why, I can't stop the tears from falling? Or why you never heard me cry, When my voice kept calling?

Oh, Green Eyes by ConcreteGirl24, literature

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Oh, Green Eyes

If only you knew, green eyes, what I cage inside. You think you read me like a book, But it's going to take more than a passing look, To uncover the secrets that I hide. You're going to have to stray into the deep. Green eyes, I can never let you see, Exactly how much this means to me, Or what, inside, I keep. Oh, Green eyes, you don't have a clue, About what goes on behind this brown eye; You'll never know how much I cry, Over shattered hearts, broken spirits; over you. If only you knew, That which I won't ever say. Oh, Green eyes, if would be so easy, If only I told you. . . But easy is no way for this to end, Green eyes. S

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Emphatic Longing by ConcreteGirl24, literature

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Emphatic Longing

Where are the Concrete? Where are the Absolute? We swim in a sea of trepidation, Caused by all this indecision. Why are we so eager to break our own principles? We are running against our own identity, Chasing away all we've ever known. How can we call this sanity? I'm sick of living in the 'maybe'. We throw away our morals, With both hand and heart. I'm mad to find the concrete! This monstrosity is growing In a place where our comfort is in the lukewarm. We are rapidly growing colder. Our eyes have long been shut and our tongues mute. We are prompted to stay silent And even I've forgotten who I am. Somewhere, along this w

Materialism by ConcreteGirl24, literature

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Materialism

How could I have let myself slip away without a fight? I've lost my core to empty promises. And so easily become a slave, Leaving it up to these materials to secure my contentment. We've made the gravest mistake; Thinking that these lies could heal. These passing exhilarations that assure to be our happiness, Has proven to be our downfall. With each day, a new whim. We fill our void with void. This lie has posessed us. We are selling our fire for flickering trick candles. Someone pinch me, Wake me from this whirlwind of buying and selling. So long have I been dreaming of this dream of riches Without notice I've slipped into thi

Only Forward by ConcreteGirl24, literature

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Only Forward

I've seen the light. The color has pierced this black and white yard. Daylight rays have punctured my night. Now, I can move only forward. I stand, I walk, I fall. But still the light shines hard, At the end of this infinite hall. Where can I go, but only forward? Even when I shut my eyes, My planet turned black, I remember how the light melts away my lies, And I know there is no turning back. I stumble, I break, I crawl, But I won't forget the light. Though I always manage to fall, I can never return to blind sight. I've tasted the sunshine, Peace has lain on my thirsty tongue. I can never rest until I've crossed that lin

Time by ConcreteGirl24, literature

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Time

We have run out of excuses. Have we nothing left to say? Have we any reasons, Why we have gone to waste another day? We all lie awake at night, Unable to shut our eyes and drift away. Wondering how we let it slip out; How we lost another day. Have you anything to tell, Did you do all that you wanted? Knowing you can never have it back, The squandered time leaves you haunted. Time never stands still. Moments tick by so fast. Can you even remember how you spent it, When it has come and passed. Why are you standing still? What is your direction? Won't you see the beauty shining through? You can take this pain and make perfect

Earth, Wealth and Heaven by ConcreteGirl24, literature

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Earth, Wealth and Heaven

Earth, will you ever fail to disappoint me? Once again, you've let me down. These fantasies are not all they are hinted to be. Wealth, you are not worth the renown. Earth, you've let me down once more, Wealth, you've left me empty handed. This isn't what you promised before. You've left your mark, left me branded. Earth, won't you give me your word, Never to charm me with your charade? Wealth, show me mercy, now forward. Cease to torture me with your lies by brigade. Let me be! Wealth, won't you stop calling my name? Your greed is stealing my empathy. Earth, you are the one to blame. Heaven, help me snap out of this spell! He

Home by ConcreteGirl24, literature

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Home

My road is long, Meandering 'round and falling steep. The wind sings to me a hopeful song, Telling of a day when I'll reach home. Home seems so far away, A place only seen in dreams, A feeling only felt in a lifeless day, A sight for sore eyes and sore heart. No road signs for us to ensue, This road goes unmarked. A vision of peace is what we pursue. Can we be sure of what's over this hill? I cry out for a place to call home, A point to lay my broken body. Too long have I taken this way to roam. I can't rest until I've found rest for my soul.

The Last Song by ConcreteGirl24, literature

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The Last Song

The concluding day has come. The sky turned black. The crimson sun falls beneath the horizon one last time. Do you wish your day back? Your desperation is too much to put into words. Time can't end, you say. You've got so much that you've planned to do, On the new year, on tomorrow, on the coming day. It can't end now, not like this. Can this be the last food to touch your tongue? Will you ever see him again? Are these the last people you'll be among? You're running a race against Father Time, The finish line is coming up fast. All your life you've been running backwards, It's too late now to fix the past. There is no later n

This Storm Will Pass by ConcreteGirl24, literature

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This Storm Will Pass

The clouds are bleeding heavy beads of rain, Loosing the torrents and duress. The wind bemoans its lonely song of pain, Thrashing on the erect without regress. The firmament is candid and grieving, Her tears falling upon desolate earth below. Our last hope is that this downpour is leaving. This storm will pass. It came down on a sunny day, Breaching the secure hope of humanity. It came down to show it's ugly way, With false pretenses to break our unity. This Storm will go by. Yes, in mere hours we'll see the day once more. The light will return to the sky. Rita, I let you know we'll be stronger than before. But for now in this

Anticipation by ConcreteGirl24, literature

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Anticipation

For so long we've been curtained, By this unfeeling shroud of night. For so long we've been certained, That we'd seen the last of light. But in our darkest hour when we've turned our back, The palest shadow of a promised dawn, Breaches the yawning sheet of black. The velvet pink revealed, the dark drape drawn. We wait, Muttering hushed hopes of light. With unspoken flutters we anticipate, That the sun will climb again to new height. The fading stars emit their final glint, Desperate to shine before they blend. Finally surpassed by the glowing tint, The shadows dilute, thinning at their final end. We wait. It can only be m

Birds of a Feather by ConcreteGirl24, literature

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Birds of a Feather

Everyday, they walk past each other, Paying no more than a minute's attention. They never think a moment further, Than a nod and smile in recognition. And they'll go their separate ways, Totally oblivious to their mutual feelings. They go on to pass their days, To see their own friends, and handle their separate dealings. He was the book worm, She was the fiery performer. He'd always be the norm, And he'd never stop to understand her. They lead two different lives, write their own books. Their eyes meet in attraction, But nothing ever came of the seizing looks. Neither would ever take action. So they'd lost the promising day

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Misfits by fallenstar731, literature

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Misfits

There's no moon tonight but you're still looking up daylight's soon to break but that's not good enough Theres a whole in your heart that you can't seem to fill Emptier than ever growing emptier still The storm in the background is drawing ever near but wind and rain and fire are the least of your fears Set of down a road -can you not come back? the world is killing you the insults won't slack I know whats wrong, but I'm not sure that you do life has set us apart, we don't talk like we used to If I were the world I would hold you in my arms embrace you with kindness unbelievably warm tell its O.K. to hurt-you ca

Broken Artist by bloodyteardrop08, literature

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Broken Artist

You broke this young artist While she was still in bud. Watched all her potential Fall to the ground in the mud. You stepped on her with your combat boots You squashed her under your heels. How could you be so cruel? Didn't you know that this young artist feels? You never spared a second glance Thinking your work was done, So you didn't see her rise again It's going to take more than that to kill this one. You broke this young artist Which in the end made her. She's talented but scarred And would like to return the favor, Of making her and breaking her, Of molding her into who she is. But there was much pain getting here An

A Lifetime of Love by relativestranger, literature

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A Lifetime of Love

Eyes met across a crowded room Was plain for all to see That at first sight he loved her and She was in love with he He walked across, and took her hand He asked to have this dance She accepted graciously, He's glad he took this chance The night wore on, the music slowed They locked in warm embrace And when it came to time to leave Still chewing at her face Now time ticks by I wonder how This couples getting on So you and me We'll go and see Continue with this song There came a time when he got down Upon a bended knee Proposal was accepted and A marriage we will see And on that day the groom turned up He's looking reall

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Countryside Afternoon by ConcreteGirl24, visual art

Countryside Afternoon

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Deviant for 18 years
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Current Residence: USA
Favourite genre of music: Rock
Personal Quote: *We are selling our fire for flickering trick candles*

Favourite Bands / Musical Artists

SwItChFoOt!!!

Favourite Writers

C.S. Lewis or Jon Foreman (writers)

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God, Switchfoot, singing, music, writing, sketching, reading, theology, C.S. Lewis

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ConcreteGirl24

Feb 13, 2006

Quotes... enjoy!

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Just a few quotes... hope they help! *The biggest problem facing our world today is a lack of hope and a lack of meaning. (It's) basically just a postmodern world in which there is no right or wrong, no better or worse.*--Jon Foreman **Hey, don't look at me! I'm innocent until proven guilty!** --Me ^_^ "Neither Death nor Hope know any boundaries in this life. However, one of them will not pass beyond into the next." --- Jon Foreman "Now is our chance to choose the right side. God is holding back to give us that chance. It won't last forever. We must take it or leave it." ~~C.S. Lewis "If we spend out time obsessing with the future or r

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ConcreteGirl24

Oct 31, 2005

I dare you to move!

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*sigh* I just did something that I've been wanting to do for some time now. Wow, there is a great weight lifted from my shoulders, you wouldn't even know. I had been needing, wanting this closure and I finally had the nerve to ask for forgiveness. You don't know how scared I was to do this, but I did it. Did I find forgiveness? Yes. Peace? No. My heart is in a jumble at the moment. But I will sleep soundly, knowing that I did what I needed to do. I did my part. I did it. This entry goes out to all of you out there that are scared to do the right thing. I DARE YOU TO MOVE! YESTERDAY NEVER HAPPENED! Do the right thing, and you will be happy th

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greenmindedred

Aug 27, 2007

hope you like and fave this one [link] sorry if i didn't ask for permission way ahead

Thanks for the fav!

that you view as a great friend or a great artist as well as the one who poked you. Happy Poking!

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bloodyteardrop08

Aug 22, 2006

"Friends are very rare jewels, indeed. They make you smile and encourage you to succeed. They lend an ear, they share words of praise and they always want to open their hearts to us."

Show your friends how much you care. Send this

to everyone you consider a FRIEND, even if
it means sending it back to the person who sent it to you. If it comes back to you, then you'll know you have a circle of friends.

YOU ARE MY FRIEND AND I AM HONORED

Melyon

Aug 18, 2006

Nice gallery! Loving Switchfoot too, also.

NOTspecific

Jul 8, 2006

Thank you so much for the

soslovinsungirl

May 31, 2006

YOU HAVE BEEN HUGGED!!!

Spread the DA love around! (you can copy and paste this message on their userpage!)

*dingding* RULES:
1- You can hug the person who hugged you!
2- You can't hug the person more than 3 times
3- You -MUST- hug 6 other people
4- You should hug them in public! Paste it on their user page! c'mon..don't be scared of public displays of affection
5- Random hugs are perfectly okay! (and sweet)
6- You should most definitly get started hugging right away...!